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Wednesday, May 1, 2019

My first blog post

So this week my group what makes you beautiful read a story called The red ball.Here is my blooms tasks on The red ball hope you like ...Knowledge
Characters
Ida
May
Principle
Fairy
Fairies
Mum
Comprehension
Demanded means you  insist on having.


Float y means light and flimsy.




Blur-means a thing that cannot be seen or heard clearly




Envy-means  feeling of discontented or resentful longing aroused by someone else's possessions, qualities, or luck


Application
What am I
1.I have flaming red curly  hair
2.I have a float y dress
3.I live in a mystical land
4.I trick people
5.I love to dance
6.I have lots of friends


Analysing

may
Ida
Is very sporty                                        Is very quiet
Has got a big sister                              Has got a little sister
Loves red ball                                       Hates red ball


New ideas
What happens after the story finishes
‘’May give that back I need that for school’’shouted Ida at her little sister May.May just ignored her big sister and carried on running.’’I said give that back’’shouted Ida at her little sister again.As  soon as mum heard Ida shouting she came into the backyard.’’May give Ida back her diary for school and Ida say sorry to may for yelling and go to school’’.So even though that may was taken away by fairies and was going to have to dance forever and then her big sister saved her when they were younger but the still do not get along.Sigh


Evaluating
I rated this text 5 out of 10 because there were some funny parts and scary parts.I would read it again  if I had to.