Animal opion writing

Hi guys,
I am back with another post .Below you can see  my opion  writing for animals working.Please give me some feedback on if you agree with me or what I can do better.Happy reading Ella😁

 Should People Use Animals for Work?  By Ella

 In my opinion using animals depends on the job.If they save people’s lives we should use animals but if an animals get hurt I am against.

 My first reason is we shouldn't use animals because they get hurt.Animals are living     Creatures and have feelings too. For example horses get whipped in some countries because they aren't moving very fast but they are doing their best.

 Secondly zoo’s pens need to be bigger. Like I said they have feelings too. For example animals are being stared at everyday just so we can be entertained. This is a very bad thing.

My last and final reason is however we can use animals because they save people's lives and the animal get an reward.For example beagles sniff out cancer.Another example is when dogs sniff people out after an avalanche. They receive food for saving lives.

So for all these excellent  reasons we can use animals but they must not get hurt or treated badly. 

Shout out to the docs and nurses

Hey readers
Guess what  we did today(A hint in the title)That's right shout out so in the video that u see below is a shout out to the doctors and nurses click on it to see what I said.☺

My ending to Can he save her

Hi guys it's me again back with another blog post.This week for writing we had to write another ending to a story we wrote.Here is mine.This is what's happen so far in the story.The slimmer wants to make the sewers were famous people want to live.

As the Slimmer went into training, Girl Power was back in their hideout and looking out of their window wall into the sunset.

And spider man well the whole time he had been eating pizza and watching the the adventure from his TV.

 Because he had slid a go pro into Ella’s uniform when he flew past them.

A few years later Girl power and Spider man were in a mission and a younger bad guy was about to blow the earth up but then a brand  new super hero came in. It was the Slimer?????

My game

How to play a minute to answer. Hi guys this week we have been reading dangerous games.One of our tasks was to make up a game show or a game.I made up a game show called a minute to answer.I hope you guys know how to play once you watch this video. Coment if you would like to play this or not and why.

click the link below to see my video.

My game

How can we help the kereru

Hi guys in the past week my reading group has been working on a book called Kaupapa Kereru. We learnt that we need to do something or kereru will become extincted.Do you want to know how to help?Great.I made this to let people know how we can help them.Happy reading.

How can we help the kereru

1.We can keep their main predators away from them.Cats,rats,possums and stoats.

2.Put up posters so that the word goes gets out.

3.Go to people who hunt kereru and try to convince them to stop.

4.Start growing their food.Fruit of native plants and induced plants.

5.Join the kaupapa kereru.

6. Every week go to  Banks Peninsula for a kereru count.