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Wednesday, August 5, 2020

My flowaden

Hi guys,
Welcome back to another blog post. For the past few weeks my class ruru have been writing and creating our very own monster. My one is called a flowaden. She is a mix between a flamingo, a panda, a penguin, and a owl. My flowaden is named lily. Here is a character description and a google drawing picture of her. I really like comments from my readers. Whenever I see I have a new comment I feel warm inside and have a good day. So please comment. Enjoy !!!
WALT
 We are learning to write the problem in narrative.
We are learning what the structure of a narrative is and how to set the scene
We are learning to introduce the characters into the narrative
We are learning to write the solution  in a narrative

This is my planning sheet for  lily

     My Monster Lily

I have an amazing secret to share with you. I hope you can keep a secret ! I have a monster. A kind and thoughtful monster, NOT a mean and scary monster. Her name is Lily.


Lily is a flowaden. That means she has flamingo legs and beach, owl wings and eyes, panda spots and ears plus a penguin head. She looks weird but she is a great friend.


How is lily a floqaden. Well she was the 2 one ever to be alive. But now she is married and has children of her own. Sorry I am getting distracted. Her dad is a flamingo, her mum is a owl, her granddad is a panda and her grandma is a penguin. It is always a weird Christmas for lily.


Lily has a lot of actions. Lily usually eats 3 things: seeds,bamboo and fish.She lives with her husband and 5 kids in the biggest tree in crazy daisy forest. Her family is famous. Not because of their type but because lily is a pop star. 


Lily loves to do a lot of things. Like flying around,singing and parenting. Since she is a mix between not-turnel  and turnel creatures, she never sleeps.

This is a story/plan about lily
This is a digatial plan of what I wanted my monster to look like 
This is the my monster that has been drawn, coloured, cut out , laminated and been stuck on the wall


Can you find my monster ???

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ella. I realy loved your character discription. It was so cool to read and it made me think of the popstar lily. It's true that she is a great friend.

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    1. Hi Abby,
      Thank you for commenting.
      She is great friend.
      If Lily was a real thing would you be a fan of hers or friend ??
      Ella

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