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Friday, August 14, 2020

Nana's story

 Hi guys,

Welcome back to another blog post. This week for reading I read a story called " Nana's story ". We had to create a comic strip explaining what we think happens after the story ends. This is mine along with a summery. 

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WALT: Use prior knowledge and context to predict what will happen next

Summery 

Nana’s story is some diary entries from a girl. This girl's nana’s leg is sore and she has to go to hospital. When she comes back from hospital her foot has been cut off. A few months later her nana died. She is very sad. But a couple of months after her nana died she was sleeping and then she saw her nana. Her Nana then gets up and walks over to her and says “ don’t cry little girl, my leg does not hurt anymore








5 comments:

  1. Hi Ella,Kezia here!!
    I like how you added the WALT and the summery of your story. I actually did this book in week 4. Maybe next time you could add some capital letters and make the summery smaller. Did you like using the comic strip thing?
    -Kezia
    please leave me a comment and check out this blog post!

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    1. Hi Kezia !!
      Thanks for commenting.
      I did like using the comic strip thing. It was way faster and eaiser.
      Did you like the book ??

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    2. Hi Ella,
      Thank you for replying to me. Yes I did like the book even though it was quite sad. What was your favorite part?

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  2. hi Ella
    your summary really got me wondering what you had done. I love the second page it was very sad i was almost crying with happy tears. Next time you could add just a bit more detail for example what kind of tour guide is she doing . go check my blog post on nanas story,Insert display text here

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    1. Hi Jaydah,
      Thanks for commenting.
      Thanks for the advice. I will try that
      Did you enjoy the story

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